Hari. Courageous Hari! You did a great job today getting up and talking of your ideas to your classmates.There were some good notes. Especially about making parts shorter, like the start and the struggle for Julia to get the sword/knife.Make some notes on how you can tell the story in less time. Then tell that essential story well.
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Hari. Courageous Hari! You did a great job today getting up and talking of your ideas to your classmates.
ReplyDeleteThere were some good notes. Especially about making parts shorter, like the start and the struggle for Julia to get the sword/knife.
Make some notes on how you can tell the story in less time. Then tell that essential story well.
Thanks Boss. i'm with u
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